Don't let these critical errors instantly disqualify your application. Learn what hiring managers hate most and discover the proven strategies that get cover letters read, remembered, and result in interviews.
Emily Rodriguez, Hiring Expert
10 min read
January 10, 2025
Your cover letter has one job: get you an interview. But most job seekers sabotage themselves with easily avoidable mistakes that instantly turn off hiring managers. After analyzing thousands of cover letters and interviewing dozens of recruiters, I've identified the 15 most deadly errorsβand exactly how to fix them.
β Bad Example:
"I am writing to apply for the position I saw on your website."
Why this kills your chances: Shows zero research and could apply to any job at any company.
β How to fix it: Mention the specific role, where you found it, and why you're excited about that particular opportunity.
β Bad Example:
"As you can see from my resume, I have 5 years of experience in marketing."
Why this kills your chances: Wastes precious space and doesn't add value beyond what's already in your resume.
β How to fix it: Tell stories that demonstrate impact and explain how your experience solves their specific problems.
β Bad Example:
"This position would be a great opportunity for me to advance my career."
Why this kills your chances: Makes it about you instead of what you can do for them.
β How to fix it: Focus on the value you bring and how you'll contribute to their success.
β Bad Example:
"I think I would be a good fit for this role."
Why this kills your chances: Sounds uncertain and lacks confidence.
β How to fix it: Use strong, confident language: 'I am excited to bring my proven track record in X to drive Y results.'
β Bad Example:
"I want to work for a growing company like yours."
Why this kills your chances: Shows you haven't researched their specific challenges, values, or recent news.
β How to fix it: Reference specific company initiatives, recent news, or challenges you can help solve.
β Don't Do This:
β Do This Instead:
The job market has evolved. Here are new mistakes that didn't exist five years ago:
2025 Don'ts:
2025 Do's:
The IMPACT Formula
Paragraph 1 - Hook & Interest
Paragraph 2 - Relevant Experience
Paragraph 3 - Company Connection
Paragraph 4 - Strong Close
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